71yearsago,Normandy,FranceUtahBeach,ateamandateamofAmericanandBritishsoldiersbravedthehailofbullets,rushedtothefrontofthebunker,athenasoldierfell,therearestillpeopleshoutingandrunningforward,foramoment,blooddyedtheentirebeach。。。71yearsago,theSovietUnion,Stalingradfront,acarandacartruckcarryingjustcameoutfromthecampoftherecruits,officersinthecarshouted:Wedontneedtolivethedeserter!Thevoicejustfell,thereisashrapnelpenetratedhishead。Therecruitsweredrivenoff,somepeoplegetguns,somepeopleonlytotakeabullet,speakersrepeatafewwords:dontgetthegunwithbehindthegun,gunComradesacrifice,withoutaguncomradespickeduphisgun,continuedthecharge。。。71yearsago,NortheastChina,avillageatnight,anakedmiddleagedrightingarmofthehangingbeltofagleamingsword,turnedinfrontofagroupofvillagers,theyalsocarryasword。Themiddleagedmansaid:Theydidntletthefamilyknow?Theywereallsilent,middleagedmanwavedhishand,goahead。Halfanhourlater,theJapanesearmybasemiserablyshoutsandthesoundofthegunsandmetalcollisionsoundcontinuously,moonlightshoneonthebladehasthecolorofgriefandindignation,withthefinalgunshot,againalsocouldnotthemoonlightontheground。。。War,inadditiontodeathanddestruction,nothingcanbringus。Thewarleftusabittermemory,butalsoleftforjusticeandpeaceanddedicationtothehero,isthattheyendedthewaranddestruction,withtheirdeath,insteadofthedeathofothers。71yearslater,Normandy,FranceUtahBeach,theninthisbloodywarveterans,putontheuniformwithdecorationshanging,walkingontheroad,peopletotheirapplauseandcheerforthem,buttheyalsodiscoveredthat,veteransofthesmilesoheavy。。。71yearslater,Russia,Moscow,RedSquare,hereistocelebrate,perhapsshouldbesaidtocommemoratetheseventyanniversaryofthevictoryofWorldWarII,themainplaces,fromtheworldsheroes,respectedbytheleadersofallcountries。71yearslaterChina,NortheastChina,asmalltown,aclassofstudents,undertheleadershipofa80yearoldman,cametothemonument,theoldmantellsthestoryofwhenhisenemiesandsurviveandescapeexperience,isstillexcited。HesangthesongthathewasbloodedSongs:Broadswordtotheenemysheadcutoff。。。。。。Thestudentsburstintotears。。。。。。Theendofthewar。Letustocommemoratethesleepingheroes!!!Memorial,inordernottoforgetthepast,forthesakeoftheworldfreedomandpeaceandfightingthesoldiers,warriors,heroes!! 修改后: 71yearsago,Normandy,FranceUtahBeach,ateamandateamofAmericanandBritishsoldiersbravedthehailofbullets,rushedtothefrontofthebunker,andthenasoldierfell。Therewerestillpeopleshoutingandrunningforward。Foramoment,blooddyedtheentirebeach。。。 71yearsago,theSovietUnion,Stalingradfront,acarandatruckjustcameoutfromthecampoftherecruits。Officersinthecarshouted,Wedontneedtolivethedeserter!Thevoicejustfell,ashrapnelpenetratedhishead。Therecruitsweredrivenoff,somepeoplegotguns,somepeopleonlytookabullet。 71yearsago,NortheastChina,avillageatnight,anakedmiddleagedmanwithagleamingswordinhisrighthandappearedinfrontofagroupofvillagers。Theyalsocarriedasword。Themiddleagedmansaid,Theydidntletthefamilyknow?Theywereallsilent,themanwavedhishand,goahead。Halfanhourlater,themiserableshouts,thesoundofthegunsandmetalcollisioncouldbecontinuouslyheardintheJapanesearmybase。Thebladehadthecolorofgriefandindignationunderthemoonlight。 War,inadditiontodeathanddestruction,canbringusnothing。Thewarleftusnotonlyabittermemory,butalsoleftusjusticeandpeacewiththededicationoftheheroes。 71yearslater,Normandy,FranceUtahBeach,theveteransputontheuniformwithdecorationshanging,walkingontheroad。Peopleapplaudedandcheeredforthem,buttheyalsodiscoveredthatveteranssmiledsoheavily。。。 71yearslater,Russia,Moscow,RedSquare,ItwastocelebratetheseventyanniversaryofthevictoryofWorldWarII。Theheroesfromdiffernetpartsoftheworldwouldberespectedbytheleadersofallcountries。 71yearslaterChina,NortheastChina,asmalltown,aclassofstudents,undertheleadershipofa80yearoldman,cametothemonument。Theoldmantoldthestoryofhisescapingexperiencesfromtheenimiesexcitedly。Thestudentsburstintotears。。。。。。 Weshouldnotforgetthepast,forthesakeoftheworldfreedomandpeaceandfightingthesoldiers,warriors,heroes! 初三:张博涵