MyBusyWeekend

　　I was vevy very busy and very very tired every weekend.I can＂t rest well in the day.I wanted play comp-uter at home!But I can＂t······ Why?This is a easy question. In the morning,I must get up early.So I was tired.My friends all are bored every weekend,but I＂m not.Imust do many things,I had two art classes in Heishan.My mom went there drive car with me.It is not f-ar. At noon,I only ate a little food,because I didn＂t have many times.I had a piano lesson at twelve o＂clock. In the afternoon,I＂m very tired now,but I still went to my English School,I had two English classes,too. In the evening,I must do my homework.I can＂t play computer games,I＂m sad. What a busy weekend!
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　　I am always  very busy and tired every weekend. I can＂t have a good rest. I want to play  computer at home! But I can＂t. I have got lots of things to do. In the morning, I must get up early. I have two art classes in Heishan. My mom drives me there.  It is not far. At noon, I only eat a little food, because I don＂t have much time . I have a piano lesson at twelve o＂clock. In the afternoon, I still have two English classes. In the evening, I must do my homework. I am so tired and sad. What a busy weekend I have!
　　修改老师：Crystal老师
　　六年级:赵子文