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　　英语六级作文范文：人和计算机 Computer and Man
　　Computer and Man
　　Ever since the birth of it, the computer has largely changed human being’s life and there has been a hot debate about its effects on humans. Undeniably, computers have taken the place of humans in many areas and it seems that computers begin to think like man, but this does not necessarily lead to the danger that man will think like computers.
　　The reasons, in my opinion, are as follows. Firstly, when computers release human from repetitive tasks, humans themselves can spend more time on creative works, such as scientific research, which require imagination and cannot be completed by computers. Meanwhile, thanks to computers, humans get more spare time with their friends and family, which enhances their happiness. Moreover, even though computers can work automatically, the premise is that the program, which is written by humans, has been installed in it.
　　In conclusion, humans, unlike computers, have creative ability, emotional desires and social bounds. Thus, I don’t think that there will be the danger that man will begin to think like the computer.
　　人和计算机
　　自从它的诞生，计算机已经极大地改变了人类的生活，有了它对人类的影响热议。不可否认，电脑已经在很多领域代替人看来，电脑开始认为这样的人，但这并不一定导致危险，男人会像计算机一样思考。
　　的原因，在我看来，如下。首先，当电脑释放人类从重复性的任务，人类自己能花更多的时间去创作的作品，如科学研究，这需要想象力和不能由计算机完成。同时，由于计算机，人类得到更多的空余时间与他们的朋友和家人，这增强了他们的幸福。此外，尽管计算机能够自动工作，前提是这些程序，这是人写的，被安装在了它。
　　总之，人类，不像电脑，有创新能力，情感的欲望和社会的界限。因此，我不认为会有人会开始喜欢电脑，认为危险。满分作文 A Letter to the Headmaster 给校长的一封信
　　Dear Headmaster,
　　I am the minister of students' life in the Student Union. On behalf of all the students, I am writing to you to give our opinions about the canteen.
　　Our canteen has something satisfactory and something unsatisfactory as well. To our satisfaction, many kinds of the food are supplied to us. Besides this, the food is cheap and tastes good. We all enjoy the food. And the surroundings in the canteen have also been improved. But the quantity of a helping they give is not enough. The seats are not enough as well.Some students have no seats when eating.
　　Finally we advise them to improve the quality of the food and their service. We will feel very happy if these problems can be solved.
　　Yours,
　　XXX
　　尊敬的校长：
　　我是学生会生活部部长。我代表所有学生给您写信反映一下我们对食堂的意见。
　　食堂有令人满意的一面也有令人不满意的一面;令我们满意的是，食堂给我们提供了很多种类的食物。另外，饭菜价格便宜，味道可口，我们很喜欢。而且食堂环境也已经改善了。但是他们给的食物的分量不足。食堂的座位也不够，一些学生吃饭时没有座位。我们希望学校会考虑增添些座位。
　　最后我们建议他们改进饭菜的质量，改善服务。如果这些问题能被解决我们会感到非常高兴。
　　尊敬您的 XXX网购 Doing Shopping Online
　　（湖北十堰）假如你正在书店购书。你对Around China和Olympic English这两本书爱不释手，但你只有40元钱。请参看下表，就这两本书的相关内容(content)进行比较，选择购买其中的一本，并简要陈述你的理由。
　　要求：1.请首先把你选择购买的书籍名称填在文首的横线上；
　　2.内容连贯，述理有据；
　　3.词数要求：80词左右。
　　Books Price Contents
　　Around China 39yuan the history, culture, places of interest about China
　　Olympic English 27yuan English and knowledge about the Olympic Games
　　I will buy ______________________ . _________________________________________________
　　范文：
　　I will buy Olympic English. It is said that learning a new language can open up another world. I am also able to understand a new way of life. So I want to learn how to speak English well. Furthermore, the 20xx Olympic Games will be held in Beijing soon. This book teaches me a lot about the Olympic Games, too. And it is cheaper than Around China. Therefore, I think it's better for me to choose Olympic English.
　　I will buy Around China. Though it is more expensive than Olympic English, I believe it is a more careful choice. I am interested in traveling. And I dream of going sightseeing throughout China in the future. The book is full of knowledge about Chinese history, culture and places of interest. It can take me into a wonderful world. At the same time, reading Around China is a good way to relax. So I will decide to buy Around China.
　　我会买奥运英语。据说学了一门新的语言可以打开另一个世界。我也能理解一种新的生活方式。所以我想学习如何讲英语。此外，20xx届奥运会即将在北京举行。这本书教我很多关于奥运会的事。而且比中国便宜。因此，我认为选择奥林匹克英语对我来说是更好的选择。
　　我会在中国买。虽然比奥林匹克英语更贵，我相信这是一个更仔细的选择。我对旅游感兴趣。我梦想将来在中国观光。这本书充满了关于中国历史、文化和兴趣的知识。它可以带我进入一个美妙的世界。同时，在中国读书是放松的好方法。所以我将决定在中国各地购买。
　　2、网上购物 Doing Shopping Online
　　With the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job. Just click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished. You needn't step out of the room.
　　It seems easy and quick. But there's always a trap online. If you are careless, it will bring you some trouble. You may find the color of the article is different from what you want, or the size is either too small or too big. If you want to be different, you'd better not buy clothes online.
　　Once you put on the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people wear the same clothes in the street.
　　在互联网的帮助下，购物不是一个困难的工作。只要按你的鼠标选择你喜欢的文章，并完成购物。你不必走出房间。
　　似乎容易和快速。但网上总有一个陷阱。如果你不小心，它会给你带来麻烦。你可能会发现这篇文章的颜色与你想要的不同，或者说的尺寸太小或太大。如果你想与众不同，你最好不要在网上买衣服。
　　一旦你穿上了你在网上买的衣服，你会发现很多人在街上穿着相同的衣服。
　　高考英语满分作文及名师评析 写信 Letter高考英语满分作文
　　[全国卷I]
　　【试题回放】
　　假定你是李华，正是英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。
　　注意：1.词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。
　　2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
　　3.参考词汇：牛津——Oxford 费用——fee
　　Dear Sir/Madame,
　　I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.
　　As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?
　　How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the nest day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.
　　Yours,
　　Li Hua
　　尊敬的先生/女士，
　　我写的更多的信息，在伦敦的一日游。
　　作为牛津大学的一名学生，我想知道你是否对学生有特殊的价格。至于你所收取的钱，它是否包括了所列地方的入场费？午饭怎么样？是否包括？还是我需要带上我自己的食物？
　　巡演将持续多久？因为我需要准备好我的功课，我想知道的时间，返回。再说，还有没有时间去购物？我真的很想看看伦敦的大商店。
　　你的，
　　李华
　　[名师点评]
　　本文是根据画面的提示来写一封电子邮件。作者在文章中首先把握了全部的要点，叙述较为完整;其次，作者运用一些过渡句和衔接词将文章串联，意思连贯。文章中采用了第一人称和一般现在时，这是值得肯定的地方。
　　[全国卷Ⅲ](四川、云南、陕西等地区用)
　　【试题回放】假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。
　　赞成迁出：反对迁出：
　　1.游客多，交通堵塞
　　2.郊区环境好1.建于1906年，中外闻名
　　2.搬迁易造成动物死亡
　　注意：1.词数100字左右，信的开头已为你写好。
　　2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
　　3.参考词汇： 郊区—suburb
　　Dear Editor ,
　　Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs .However ,other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well –known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .What’s more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.
　　Yours truly,
　　Li Hua
　　亲爱的编辑，
　　最近，在我们班上，有一个激烈的讨论，北京动物园是否应该搬出城市。一些同学都赞成的举动。他们说大量的游客到动物园将导致交通堵塞。他们还说，曾经的感动，动物将有更大的空间和更好的生活条件在郊区。然而，其他学生都反对这个主意，说的北京动物园，建于1906年，有100多年的历史，，好–已知在国内和国外。所以它应该保持，它是。什么是更多，移动可能会造成一些动物的死亡。移动或不，这是一个大的决定是由北京人。
　　你真正的，
　　李华
　　[名师点评]
　　这篇文章写得还是比较精彩的。要点表达得完整而准确，清楚展示了主题。先提出了文章的主题，进而列出了赞成的观点及其相关的理由，同时在其后又给出了反面的观点，论据十分充足。文章结构严谨，前后连贯。
　　【北京卷】
　　【试题回放】
　　第一节情景作文(20分)
　　美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。
　　注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好。
　　2.词数不少于60。
　　Dear Jeff,
　　I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.
　　While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.
　　If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.
　　Best wishes,
　　Li Hua
　　亲爱的杰夫，
　　我华从北京红星中学。我很高兴得知你在北京的时候会和我的家人在一起。
　　当你在这里，我们会为你提供一个你自己的房间，一张床，一张桌子，几把椅子和一台电视机。你也有自己的浴室。我们学校离我们家很近，所以我们可以骑自行车去上学。中午我们在学校食堂吃饭。我敢肯定你会喜欢那里的美味的中国菜，喜欢和朋友一起吃午饭。我们学校的课程通常在下午4点完成。你可以和其他同学一起玩球类或游泳。这将是一个很大的乐趣。
　　如果您有任何问题或要求，请让我知道。我们将尽我们最大的努力，使您在这里的逗留在北京愉快的体验。
　　最美好的祝愿，
　　李华
　　[名师点评]
　　这篇文章的特点还是比较清晰的，第一，作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整，内容充实而丰富，结构紧凑，有层次感;第二，本文没有采用华丽的辞藻，但用词十分恰当，段落过渡自然，令人耳目一新。高考英语满分作文 The school should organize students outing
　　春天是旅游的好季节,某外国语学校校长要求各班同学就春游一事展开讨论.讨论的主题是:学校要不要组织学生春游.校长还要求班长就讨论的情况用英语写一封信给他.
　　假定你是某班班长李华,请你根据下列表格中的信息客观地介绍讨论情况.
　　注意:1,信的格式已为你写好;2,词数:100左右;3,生词:拓宽 broaden
　　70%的学生赞成春游
　　30%的学生反对春游
　　1. 可以领略大自然的优美风景;
　　2. 拓宽视野,增长知识;
　　3. 呼吸新鲜空气,有益于身体健康.
　　1. 时间紧,耽误学习;
　　2. 增加父母经济负担;
　　3. 担心安全.
　　范文
　　Dear Headmaster,
　　I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had on whether the school should organize a spring outing for the students.
　　Opinions on the question are pided as follows:70% of the students think that the school should organize the spring outing. They believe that the spring outing can make them enjoy the nature's beautiful scenery, which can broaden our vision and fill us with more knowledge. They also say that the air in the open fields is fresher. What's more, fresh air does a lot of good to our health.
　　On the other hand,30% don't like the idea of going out for a spring outing. In their opinions, time is very precious, so they have to grasp every minute to work hard at their lessons. Traveling costs a lot. In that case, it will add to their families' burden. Above all, no one can be sure of the safety of every student.
　　Yours truly
　　Li Hua
　　尊敬的校长，
　　我写信告诉你关于学校是否应该组织一次春季郊游的讨论。
　　对问题的看法有如下：70%的学生认为学校应该组织＂春季郊游＂。他们认为，春季郊游可以使他们享受大自然的美丽的风景，它可以扩大我们的视野，使我们更多的知识。他们还说，在空旷的田野的空气很清新。更新鲜的空气对我们的健康有很大的健康。
　　另一方面，30%不喜欢外出郊游的想法。在他们的观点中，时间是非常宝贵的，所以他们要抓紧每一分的努力，在他们的课程中努力学习。旅游成本很多。在这种情况下，它会增加他们家庭的负担。首先，没有人能确保每个学生的安全。
　　你真正的
　　李华中考英语作文模板：The computer
　　The computer is widely used in education，and some people think teachers do not play important roles in the classroom. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
　　In this period of communication, computer has been used in all kinds of fields widely, and plays a particular role in our lives. Especially computer has become more and more important in educational field, therefore dozens of people considered teachers could be replaced computers that will go with the current of the times. The above point is certainly wrong; this essay will outline three reasons.
　　The main reason is that people's brain better than computer. Firstly, people design all kinds of computer's programs. Secondly, computer doesn't have logistic ideation. Computer only can defend on that designer inputted computer's programs to judge a question's right or wrong. In other words, computer can't defend on thinking that computer independently analyzes a question's right or wrong. In case, designer inputted programs that are wrong. Computer output the result that also will be wrong. If this kind of problem happened in classroom, students would be infused plenty of wrong information.
　　Another reason is that computer's programs designed software of education that could be amended difficultly. If software of education of bugs were found, commonly these of problems couldn't be solved in the classroom. The software was amended that means total of program were corrected, not only parts of program were ed or amended usually.
　　Last but not the least reason is computer is mechanical, it couldn't be suited all kinds of students and different demands. As students' intellect is different, same of software couldn't base on every status of student to set a perfect project.
　　In conclusion, computers couldn't instead of the position of teachers in the classroom, however computer is an absolutely good helper for teacher.
　　计算机计算机在教育领域中的广泛应用，一些人认为没有老师在课堂上发挥重要作用。你同意还是不同意？在这一时期的通信，计算机已被应用于各种领域广泛，并且在我们的生活中起着独特的作用。尤其是在教育领域，计算机已成为越来越重要的作用，因此教师数十人认为可以取代电脑，将顺应时代的潮流。上述观点肯定是错误的；本文将概述三个原因。主要的原因是，人们的大脑比电脑。首先，人们设计了各种各样的计算机程序。其次，计算机没有逻辑思维能力。计算机只能在该设计师保卫输入计算机的程序来判断问题的对错。换句话说，计算机不能捍卫独立思考的计算机分析问题的正确或错误。在情况下，输入的程序设计是错误的。计算机输出的结果，也将是错误的。如果这类问题发生在课堂上，学生将注入大量的错误信息。另一个原因是计算机程序设计的软件教育可以修改难。如果教育软件的漏洞被发现，通常这类问题不能在课堂上解决。该软件进行了修订，这意味着总计划得到纠正，不仅在程序部分，插入或修改通常。最后但并非最不重要的原因是计算机的机械，它不可能适合学生和各种不同的要求。学生的智力是不同的，相同的软件无法根据每一个学生的身份设定一个完美的计划。总之，计算机不能代替教师在课堂上的位置，但是计算机是教师绝对的好帮手。