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　　Walking in the street, singing, breathing and smiling. Yes, it＂s March, spring is coming.       Miss Spring is very shy, she has the quietest foot-steps in the world. Therefore, everything   is growing in silence during spring, as a consquence, we aren＂t aware that spring has come   until certain signs appear.      A year＂s plan starts in spring. Spring is temporary but full of vigor and vitality. So, I think something meaningful should be done for the special season.         Hug in spring, hug in health. As we know, a healthy body is worth more than gold. Affecte by the fog, people hardly go out in winter, in fact, it＂s bad for our body. Now, in the early  spring, just go out with family, sitting on the grass, seeing the scattered flowers spread      from near to far, listening to the birds singing in the tree and breathing the fresh air     around you, at the same time, having a picnic, I＂m sure everyone of your family will be in a good   mood! Of course, you can also have an outing in spring with your friends.      Hug in spring, hug in success. Now it is the beginning of the new year, a specific   plan should be made carefully and completed in time. Working under the  direction of   the    arrangements, we will keep energetic all year round, and we will achieve our goals and   make much progress in the end!      Hug in spring, hug in dream. As students of Senior 3, it won＂t be long before we      graduate and take the National Matriculation Examinations. It＂s certain that all of us are    eager to enter excellent colleges, so we are supposed to make every effort to study hard   and improve our grades rapidly. Just sow in spring, and the efforts will become the reality  in autumn, we will reap what we sowed! Remember, little steps add up to a big dream!     Hug in spring, hug in what you want! The spring is exact, the sunshine is warm!
　　修改后：
　　Walking in the street, I can hear birds singing and see flowers smiling.  Spring has come quietly. Everything begins to come back to life and starts to grow.  A year＂s plan starts in spring. Spring is short but full of vigor and vitality. So, I think something meaningful should be done. Hug in spring and be health. As we know, a healthy body is worth more than gold. Because of the haze,  people hardly go out in winter, which is bad for our body. Now, it＂s time for going out with family,  to sit on the grass, see colorful flowers, listen to birds singing and breathe fresh air. At the same time, we can have a picnic with our family and have a great time. Of course, you can also have an outing with your friends. Hug in spring and be successful. Now it is the beginning of the new year, a specific plan should be made carefully and completed in time. Working under the  direction of   the   arrangements, we will keep energetic all year round, and we will achieve our goals and make much progress in the end! Hug in spring and be practical.  As high school seniors,  we will soon take the National College Entrance Examination and graduate from high school. It＂s certain that all of us are eager to enter excellent colleges, so we are supposed to make every effort to study hard and improve ourselves rapidly. We sow in spring, keeping on working hard. Then we can reap what we sowed! Remember, little steps add up to a big dream! Hug in spring, and hug in what you want!
　　修改老师：Crystal 老师
　　高三:李和淼