2021年上海虹口区高三一模英语作文范文

　　20xx年虹口区高三一模原题：
　　II. Guided writing
　　Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
　　你班将召开一次主题班会，探讨高中生在成长过程中遇到的烦恼。请根据自己实际生活中遇到的学习、交友、代沟、同龄人攀比等现象进行思考，写一篇发言稿。文章需包括：
　　1. 你在实际生活中遇到的至少两种烦恼及其简要介绍;
　　2. 你应对这些烦恼所采取的举措和建议。
　　昂立高考名师程林华老师范文：
　　How to Tackle Troubles in High School
　　1It is natural that we, high school students, will meet a series of troubles both at school and at home. How to deal with these issues poses a challenge for us.
　　Surely, the troubles that inpiduals face differ. 2As far as I am concerned, the following two issues distract me most. 3To begin with, I encounter great pressure from study, because I always dream of entering the best university in Shanghai. 4In China, a country with such a large population, the competition for excellent universities is so fierce that almost all students have to work hard, even to burn the midnight oil, as I always do. Furthermore, 5it is the lack of in-depth communication with my parents that also bothers me a lot. 6Whenever talking to me, they only focus on the scores of examinations. 7What I want from them is simply encouragement and support, instead of enormous pressure.
　　8As for the above-mentioned troubles, on the one hand, I need to improve my study strategies, so as to be more efficient in study; on the other hand, I will communicate with my parents more frequently, to acquire support. Maybe, after understanding my stress, they will render more help to me.
　　9In short, currently, I do face some troubles. However, 10I am fully convinced that I will be able to handle them properly and make progress day by day. (Words: 228)
　　内容分析
　　虹口区本次一模作文题目，探讨学生的烦恼以及解决措施，命题贴近学生的学习和生活。学生看到这个作文题，一般都会有很多想法。