TherewasoncealittlegirlnamedJerrythatlivedwithhermotherinasmallcottageintheforest,theywereverypoor,andcouldonlyaffordtoeatbread。ldquo;Ohno!rdquo;criedJerryrsquo;smotheronenoon,ldquo;Weranoutofbread,anditisalmosttimeforsupper!rdquo;ldquo;Dowehaveanyeggsleft?rdquo;askedJerry,ldquo;No,none;rdquo;saidhermotherveryworried。 ldquo;Donrsquo;tworrymother,rdquo;saidJerrysuddenly,ldquo;Ishallgoandgetsomeinthemarket。rdquo;Thensheranoffthroughtheforesttothemarketwithherbasket。Alongtheway,shewasquitetired,andsoresteduponsomebigrocks。ItgraduallybecamelateandJerrydecidedtogoandbuythebread,butsuddenlyawolfcriedoutbehindher;ldquo;Please,pleasehelpme!rdquo;criedthewolf,ldquo;Ihaveaproblemthatnobodywantstohelp!rdquo;thenheheldouthispawtoJerry,therewasathornstucktohispaw。ldquo;Isthisatrick?rdquo;askedJerry,ldquo;Becausewolvesliketoeatpeople。rdquo; ldquo;Ohno,rdquo;answeredthewolf,ldquo;Wedonoteatpeoplenow,weonlywanttoeatsomebreadwithmustardontop;rdquo;thenhecriedagain。Jerryquicklykneltdownandremovedthethornfromthewolfrsquo;spaw;ldquo;Ohthankyou!Thankyou!rdquo;shoutedthewolfjoyfully,ldquo;Ishallneverforgetyourkindness!rdquo;thenthewolfreturnedtohishome。Jerrywalkedtothemarkettobuyhealthyfreshbread,andthensheranoffhomewithafullbasketofit。 Ontheway,shewasstilltired;andsoshestayedatthesameplaceandthesametime。Asshewasabouttogo,somegreedywolvesblockedherway;theyhadwaterintheirmouthsandsaid,ldquo;Giveusthebread!rdquo;saidawolf,ldquo;Wherearethemustard?rdquo;askedasecondwolf,ldquo;Justgiveittous!rdquo;shoutedthethirdwolf。Jerryhadnochoice,asshewasabouttogivethefreshbreadawaytothewolf,thewolfthatshehadsavedbeforerushedoutandsaid,ldquo;Leaveheralone!rdquo;hegrowled,ldquo;Thatgirlsavedmebefore,andsoleaveheralone!rdquo;heshoutedagain。 Theotherwolveshadnochoicebuttoobey,theywalkedaway。Jerrythankedhernewfriendthewolf,andthewolfsaidthathewassupposedtodothatinreturn。AndsotoshowJerryrsquo;srespectforhim,shegavehimhalfthebread,andreturnedhomeimmediatelytotellhermotheraboutit。 Theyhadsomebreadthatevening,andJerryrsquo;smotherincludingJerryherselfallbecamegoodfriendswiththewolf;thewolfalsohadplentyofbread,andmovedhishomeclosetoJerry。 Themoralofthisstorywas,ifyouhelpothersandtheywillhelpyou,youhelpthemagainthenfriendsyoursquo;llbecome。Itwillbeapeacefullifeiffriendshipisallaroundus;andthatwouldbegreatforanimportantlesson。 修改后: TherewasoncealittlegirlnamedJerrythatlivedwithhermotherinasmallcottageintheforest。Theywereverypoor,andcouldonlyaffordtoeatbread。ldquo;Ohno!rdquo;criedJerryrsquo;smotheroneafternoon,ldquo;Weranoutofbread,anditisalmosttimeforsupper!rdquo;ldquo;Dowehaveanyeggsleft?rdquo;askedJerry,ldquo;No,none;rdquo;saidhermotherveryworried。 ldquo;Donrsquo;tworrymother,rdquo;saidJerrysuddenly,ldquo;Ishallgoandgetsomeinthemarket。rdquo;Thensheranoffthroughtheforesttothemarketwithherbasket。Alongtheway,shewasquitetired,sosheresteduponsomebigrocks。ItgraduallybecamelateandJerrydecidedtogoandbuythebread,butsuddenlyawolfcriedoutbehindher;ldquo;Please,pleasehelpme!rdquo;criedthewolf,ldquo;Ihaveaproblemthatnobodywantstohelp!rdquo;thenheheldouthispawtoJerry,therewasathornstucktohispaw。ldquo;Isthisatrick?rdquo;askedJerry,ldquo;Becausewolvesliketoeatpeople。rdquo; ldquo;Ohno,rdquo;answeredthewolf,ldquo;Wedonoteatpeoplenow,weonlywanttoeatsomebreadwithmustardontop;rdquo;thenhecriedagain。Jerryquicklykneltdownandremovedthethornfromthewolfrsquo;spaw;ldquo;Ohthankyou!Thankyou!rdquo;shoutedthewolfjoyfully,ldquo;Ishallneverforgetyourkindness!rdquo;thenthewolfreturnedtohishome。Jerrywalkedtothemarkettobuyhealthyfreshbread,andthensheranbackhomewithafullbasketofit。 Ontheway,shewasstilltired;soshestayedatthesameplace。Asshewasabouttogo,somegreedywolvesblockedherway。Theyhadwaterintheirmouthsandsaid,ldquo;Giveusthebread!rdquo;saidawolf,ldquo;Wherearethemustard?rdquo;askedasecondwolf,ldquo;Justgiveittous!rdquo;shoutedthethirdwolf。Jerryhadnochoice,asshewasabouttogivethefreshbreadawaytothewolf,thewolfthatshehadsavedbeforerushedoutandsaid,ldquo;Leaveheralone!rdquo;hegrowled,ldquo;Thatgirlsavedmebefore,andsoleaveheralone!rdquo;heshoutedagain。 Theotherwolveshadnochoicebuttoobey,theywalkedaway。Jerrythankedhernewfriendthewolf,andthewolfsaidthathewassupposedtodothatinreturn。InordertoshowJerryrsquo;srespectforhim,shegavehimhalfthebread,andreturnedhomeimmediatelytotellhermotheraboutit。 Theyhadsomebreadthatevening,andJerryrsquo;smotherincludingJerryherselfbothbecamegoodfriendswiththewolf。Thewolfalsohadplentyofbread,andmovedhishomeclosetoJerry。 Themoralofthisstorywas:ifyouhelpothersandtheywillhelpyouinreturn,youhelpthemagainthenfriendsyoursquo;llbecome。Itwillbeapeacefullifeiffriendshipisallaroundus。 四年级:欧阳雨鹭