TheTraditionalCultureWillNever

　　TheTraditionalCultureWillNeverBeLost
　　Theinformationrevolution，thedevelopmentofmassmediaandtheachievementsinscienceandtechnologyhavedoubtlesslyusheredusinarapidlyprogressingsociety，wherewemayhavenotimetotalkaboutourtraditionalculture。Inthecity，noonecanescapefromthefastpace。Weeatthepopularizedfastfoodandenjoythepopularizedfastfoodculture。Sincewegetsousedtosuchfastthingsthatmanytraditionalthingshavebeenneglected，somepeoplebelievethatthetraditionalculturewillgraduallybelost，butIthinkitwillneverbelost。
　　Althoughentertainmentsareinabundancenowadays，traditionalculturesstillcontinuetodominate。Westillregardgoingtoaconcertasaluxury。Manyclassicbookstouchastringfromgenerationtogenerationinspiteoftimeandspace。Andwearestillmovedbytheinspirationalspiritsofourgreatancestors。Traditionalfestivalsremindusofourdispositiontothetraditionalculture。Ourreliefintraditionalculturegetsreadytoreviveatanytime。
　　Tosometraditionalculturesthatareondecline，wehavetakenactivemeasurestoconservethem。Expertshavecomeupwithproperadviceonprotectingsuchcultures。Manyvolunteershavededicatedthemselvestostudyingthem。Firstandforemost，moreandmorepeoplehavediscernedtheimportanceofthetraditionalculture。Therefore，wearesurethatoureffortswillleadtoabrilliantfuture。
　　Ifaculturewantstogainaneternallife，itshouldchangeitselftocatertothepeopleinitsage。Sodoesourtraditionalculture。Traditionalculturesadheringtomodernmeansappearrigorous。Forexample，wemakeCDsforclassicmusicsothatitcannotonlymeetmodernneedsbutalsospreadfurtherandmoresuccessfullyinthemodernworld。Theappearanceoftraditionalculturechanges，buttheessencewillneverchangeandwillbewellaccepted。
　　Thereisnoneedtoworryaboutwhetherourtraditionalculturewillbelost。Itisanimportantheritageofthewholehumanrace。Noculture，nomankind。Wecherishthetraditionalcultureaswecherishourbloodinourbody。Thetraditionalcultureliesinlife，forevercontinuing。
　　简评
　　信息厚炸，科技革命，快餐文化人们身不由己，无暇他顾。这些无疑会引发人们对传统文化的担忧。作者针对这一现象斩钉截铁地提出自己的论点：传统文化不会消亡。然后作者运用了生活中许多为人们所熟知的例子，以及一些良好的排比句式，分段逐层推进，列举、讨论了人们对待传统文化中不同内容的态度和做法，并展望了前景，从而较好地完成了论证的任务。
　　全文思维活跃，条理井然，可见作者是位细心之人，有一个善于思考的头脑和一颗善感的心。只是在有些语句的表达上还可进行雕琢，以免艰涩难懂。
　　（点评教师：时丽娜）
　　TheTraditionalCultureWillNeverBeLost