TherewasonceaboyandHenrywhowerebothverygoodfriendsthatlivedveryclosetoeachother。Eachdaytheywouldgooutsideandplay。Onedaytheirparentshaddecidedtoletthemgotoschooltolearnlessons。Ofcoursetheybothloveditverymuch。 Theywereinthesameclassandstudiedveryhardtoearnareward。 Onedaywhentheywereontheirwaytoschool,theirparentstoldthemtoneverevergoontotheice;itmaymeltsincespringwasstartinghere。 Theybothagreed,butdidtheyreallylistentothem?Well,theywentofftothepondsincetheyweregoingtocrossit,theywereverylazyanddidnotwanttogothatfar;theydidnrsquo;tthinkthatitwasevenpossiblethattheicewouldmelt,sotheywentontheiceslowlytocrossit。 Suddenly,theybothfeltacrackundertheirfeet,andtheicebetocrackandmelt;theywereverynervous,andthoughtthatiftheycouldonlylistentotheirparents。Whenitwastimeforschooltostart,theystilldidnrsquo;tcrossit。Atlastwhentheywereabouttoreachshore;boom!Theicecracked,andbothofthemfellintothecoldicywater。Theystruggledforawhile,atlastHenryfoundalittlespotwherebothofthemcouldholdandpullthemupfromtheicywater。 Theyslowlyswamtothebeam,andsteppedonarockwhichwaslyingthere,Henryliftedhimselfupandwhatdoyouknow,hegotup。Theotherboydidthesamethingandbothofthemgotonshore。 Theywenttoschoolallsoakedwetandgoofy,theirteacherscoldedthemfornotcomingtoschoolontime;ofcoursetheyhadextrahomeworkfortheday;butbothofthemdidnrsquo;tmind。Whentheygothome,theywenttotheirparentsandcriedmother!rdquo;theirmomssawthemallsoakedandwet,theyaskedthem;ldquo;Howdidyougetsowet?rdquo;andtheboyscriedout,ldquo;Wedidnrsquo;tobeyyou!rdquo;thentheytoldthemthewholestory;andtheirmomsweregladthatHenryfiguredoutthattherewasarockthatcouldbringthembothsafeontoland。 Theyalllearnedalesson,anditis: Alwaysobeyyourparentsnomatterwhathappened;andrememberthisstoryifyoudonrsquo;tknowaboutit。Ifyoudonrsquo;tobeyyourparents,thethingsthatneverhappenedmightevencometolifehellip; 修改后: TherewasonceaboyandHenrywhowerebothverygoodfriendsthatlivedveryclosetoeachother。Eachdaytheywouldgooutsideandplay。Onedaytheirparentsdecidedtoletthemgotoschooltolearnlessons。Ofcoursetheybothloveditverymuch。 Theywereinthesameclassandstudiedveryhardtoearnareward。 Onedaywhentheywerereadytogotoschool,theirparentstoldthemneverevertowalkontheice;itmaymeltsincespringwasstartinghere。 Theybothagreed,butdidtheyreallykeepinmindofit?Well,theywentofftothepondsincetheyweregoingtocrossit。Theyweretoolazytowalktheotherways;andtheydidnrsquo;tthinkthatitwasevenpossiblethattheicewouldmelt,sotheywentontheiceslowlytocrossit。 Suddenly,theybothfeltacrackundertheirfeet,andtheicewastocrackandmelt。Theywereverynervousandregrettednotfollowingtheirparentsadvice。Whenitwastimeforschooltostart,theystilldidnrsquo;tcrossit。Whentheywereabouttoreachshore;boom!Theicecracked,andbothofthemfellintothecoldicywater。Theystruggledforawhile,atlastHenryfoundalittlespotwherebothofthemcouldholdandpullthemupfromtheicywater。 Theyslowlyswamtothebeam,andsteppedonarockwhichwaslyingthere,Henryliftedhimselfupandtheotherboydidthesamethingandbothofthemgotonshore。 Theywenttoschoolallsoakedwetandgoofy,theirteacherscoldedthemfornotcomingtoschoolontime。Ofcoursetheyhadextrahomeworkfortheday;butbothofthemdidnrsquo;tmind。Whentheygothome,theywenttotheirparentsandcried。Theirmomssawthemallsoakedandwet,theyaskedthem;ldquo;Howdidyougetsowet?rdquo;andtheboyscriedout,ldquo;Wedidnrsquo;tobeyyou!rdquo;Thentheytoldthemthewholestory。TheirmomsweregladthatHenryfiguredoutthattherewasarockthatcouldbringthembothsafeontoland。 Theyalllearnedalesson,anditis: Alwaysobeyyourparentsnomatterwhathappened。Ifyoudonrsquo;tobeyyourparents,theterriblethingsthatneverhappenedmightevencometolifehellip; 四年级:欧阳雨鹭